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ya, i likr this pic, so shush. i know her other ear is missing, my excuse is that it was cut off. and the stuff behind her is fire

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:iconrioni-riishu:
Well, the general shape of the prophile is decent... I think you overexagerrated the length of the ear by quite a lot, though. The neck is also way too skinny and back too far.

I think it's the coloring that detracts the most, though. The style looks sloppy and lazy, and shows no real shading or lightsource. The strokes on the hair should be in a more uniform direction and flow, and the face could use some shading- and maybe the whole thing needs some reflected light from the fire. You've also got a lot of white showing around your lineart that needs to be cleaned up.

-Ri
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=><'= 1) night elves = huge ears. blame blizzard, not me.
2) thanks for the suggestions, ill keep them in mind.
-Muse

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